It’s probably time I finished the rewrites on this one and made it presentable.
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He noticed the rattle trap car as soon as it pulled behind him on the main drag in town. The car was a long way back when he got to his driveway. Mitch reached his front door and heard the ragged strains of Sweet Home Alabama blasting from a tinny car stereo, then came the noise of a creaking and rumbling junk car before he saw it rattle noisily into his driveway and clunk to a stop. The motor choked dead but the radio blared on as the door screeched open. Before he heard her first scream, he knew it was Linda.
I love this story. We’ll told. You descriptions are great. FYI: There is a typo. It should read “tiny” car, but it reads “tinny” car. Sent from my T-Mobile 4G LTE Device
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No, I was wrong. Duh! It is supposed to be tinny. My bad! Still, great story!
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